essay pre-writing

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In this scene, there is a deer mounted to the wall, crying, as a white cat sits and watches.

thesis: This picture portrays the negative effect humans have on wild animals.


outline: Paige, Zach, Tom

Paragraph 1: Intro
       Thesis = This picture portrays the negative effect humans have on wild animals.

Paragraph 2: body 1
  • topic = deer crying
  • analysis = deer is hunted + mounted
    • crying shows the deer's feelings
    • trophy
  • deer mounted + crying
Paragraph 3: body 2
  • topic = cat observing
  • cat is living in luxury
    • represents humans
  • cushion, water and food bowls, cat watching the deer cry
Paragraph 4: conclusion 


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