essay pre-writing
In this scene, there is a deer mounted to the wall, crying, as a white cat sits and watches. thesis: This picture portrays the negative effect humans have on wild animals. outline: Paige, Zach, Tom Paragraph 1: Intro Thesis = This picture portrays the negative effect humans have on wild animals. Paragraph 2: body 1 topic = deer crying analysis = deer is hunted + mounted crying shows the deer's feelings trophy deer mounted + crying Paragraph 3: body 2 topic = cat observing cat is living in luxury represents humans cushion, water and food bowls, cat watching the deer cry Paragraph 4: conclusion