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essay pre-writing

In this scene, there is a deer mounted to the wall, crying, as a white cat sits and watches. thesis: This picture portrays the negative effect humans have on wild animals. outline: Paige, Zach, Tom Paragraph 1: Intro        Thesis = This picture portrays the negative effect humans have on wild animals. Paragraph 2: body 1 topic = deer crying analysis = deer is hunted + mounted crying shows the deer's feelings trophy deer mounted + crying Paragraph 3: body 2 topic = cat observing cat is living in luxury represents humans cushion, water and food bowls, cat watching the deer cry Paragraph 4: conclusion 

photo revision classmate

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Engulfed by an endless blue sky, A castle was surrounded is surrounded by fluffy white clouds. The castle looks like a little toy against the size of the balloon. Six yellow ropes were carrying the castle, attached to the huge sphere. The colors of the image harmonize. The yellow, the white, the different shades of blue, they all worked together. The balloon portrays the colors of blue. Each panel is a different color, dark blue, blue with a touch of green and deep in the crevices was black. The castle is covered in the shadows from the balloon. A contrast of yellow pops out, revealing the location of the sun. The clouds barely stand out as they lack in color. Rows of windows cover the cast and the openings arch.  The peaceful lands of Alfheim trembled under the roar of an earthquake. The castle standing tall on a steep hill lifted off the ground. The thick was began cracking, causing panic among the castle workers. The workers scurried around the castle, looki...

paragraphs for photo revision

The Life or Death Choice setting: The white rabbit with fur as white as snow stood covered in metal. He wielded a sword, sharp and piercing. He stood, looking at 3 doors. Each door was different. The first door stood tall. It was red with gold accents swirling around and 2 gold doorknobs. It's elegance over threw the other two. The second door was merely planks of wood nailed together. It was surrounded by a pattern of stones. The third door was made of steel. It was strong, held together by bolts. The three posed as choices, each holding different paths. plot: The white rabbit with fur as white as snow was knighted by the king, in hopes of rescuing the princess. It was his last hope, as many other knights went in search of the princess yet never returned. The white rabbit went off, scared for his life yet ready to go into battle. He approached the castle where the princess lies, trapped. He enters. He approaches three doors. The first stood tall. It was red with accents...

paragraphs for picture

setting: The white rabbit with fur as white as snow stood covered in metal. He wielded a sword, sharp and piercing. He stood, looking at 3 doors. Each door was different. The first door stood tall. It was red with gold accents swirling around and 2 gold doorknobs. The second door was merely planks of wood nailed together. It was surrounded by a pattern of stones. The third door was made of steel. It was strong, held together by bolts. The three posed as choices, each holding different paths. plot: The white rabbit with fur as white as snow was knighted by the king, in hopes of rescuing the princess. It was his last hope, as many other knights went in search of the princess yet never returned. The white rabbit went off, scared for his life yet ready to go into battle. He approached the castle where the princess lies, trapped. He enters. He approaches three doors. The first stood tall. It was red with accents of gold swirling around, connecting back to the gold doorknobs. The secon...

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The knight had to chose the right door in order to save the princess. before: the princess was taken, locked away in a castle to never see daylight again. after: the princess walks out of the building, saved from the noble knight who sacrificed himself for the greater good. - white rabbit - red door with golden details - wooden door - stone door - rabbit is a knight - holding a sword - looking at three doors - stone floors - hears cries from princess - rabbit is brave - wood door is rough

action verbs

1. talked     I talked to my family and friends. 2. worked     I worked during the crazy holidays. 3. slept     I slept a lot. 4. walked     I walked my dog. 5. partied     I partied with friends. 6. drove     I drove, mostly to work. 7. ate     I ate a lot of good food, including pierogis. 8. shopped     I shopped at danbury mall. 9. binge watched     I binge watched a show on Netflix. 10. dreamed     I dreamed about cotton candy.